Thursday, September 26, 2013

Poem of the Day

A Dream Within a Dream
Edgar Allan Poe 
 
Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow —
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand —
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep — while I weep!
O God! Can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

Place Poem

Ants creep along asphalt trails;
Cars stuck in traffic, covered in grime.
One ant honks his horn in anger,
flipping off the insect in another lane.
Ferns hang over the forest floor, casting shadows upon its inhabitants.
Great conifers protrude from the earth,
and creatures enjoy the view from their many balconies.
A swallow makes his way across a wooden skyway.
Chirp chirp, he mumbles as he stumbles into a bright red robin.
"Watch it, asshole!"



Brainstorm/Ideas

City
-Skyscraper
-Crosswalk
-Asphalt
-Balcony
-Dumpster
-Chain link fence
-People
-Gray
-Dirty
-Bustling
-Noisy

Natural world:
-Clouds
-Trees
-Grass
-Breeze
-Fresh air
-Birds
-Colors
-Quiet

Thursday, September 19, 2013

Poem dump

Write a poem using ideas from another class:

-Marginal Cost
-Externalities
-Utility
-Market Failure
-Comparative advantage

Coming home each night
I weigh the marginal cost
Of completing assignments.
Sure, debate is important
But I have a comparative
advantage specializing in Calculus




Chapter 1, writing prompt #1
-First day at SPA
-Moving to China
-Moving back to the U.S.
-My first day on a snowboard
-Building bike jumps in the woods
-My dying grandmother’s hallucinations
-Each incident of breaking a bone
-When I cried on the hockey rink in 5th grade
-Dropping into the biggest ramp at the skate park in 4th grade
-The only snow day ever at SPA
-The awful experience at Chinese immersion camp
-The amazing first time at snowboard camp

“Spider”
As I dropped my duffel bag on my camp bunk bed,
I saw a spider disappear under the sheets.
During orientation on the first day of Chinese immersion,
I swatted away a spider I caught creeping up my arm.
While I munched on my hundredth bowl of white rice at dinner,
I spotted a spider hanging from underneath the table.
As I sat on the toilet addressing Nature’s Call,
Dozens of spiders patiently waited in their webs next to my face.
I hate spiders.

Chapter 1, writing prompt #3

“Showering”
I whip off my shirt and my own body odor hits me like a train;
This is long overdue.
In the next five minutes, I patiently wait as precious water floods down the drain.
Once the water is hot, I enter.
Such is the American way.
I’m careful to avoid the drain in the middle;
For unknown reasons I’m repulsed by this steely grate in the floor.
I act like the drain is a land mine – stepping on it, catastrophic.
The cleansing ritual continues.

Chapter 2, writing prompt #2

“Christmas”
Awesome, I exclaim with the best fake enthusiasm I can muster.
The crinkled wrapping paper has parted,
Revealing the identity of the rectangular prism:
Ulysses S. Grant: A Biography.
This looks really interesting, Grandpa! I lie through my teeth.
Jim Gaffigan’s words echo in my head –
What is this? An assignment?
But I know who would love this present
My father’s passion is history. I expect he’ll find this a thrilling read.
Luckily dad was making coffee in the kitchen
So I quickly stow the novel beneath my seat.
It will make a fantastic gift when his birthday rolls around.
 




Prompt 6
“I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America.”
Tears left glistening trails across her plump cheeks
A couple strands of blonde hair stuck to her face
Where the salty drops had passed through.

Ms. Hane, my kindergarten teacher, cried.

“And to the republic, for which it stands,”

She couldn’t quite illustrate
Through choked back sobs and soaked eyelashes
To a group of five year olds
How burning bodies were falling from towers in New York City.

“One nation, under God,”

I’m not sure if she cried because she had family in New York,
or if the reports of burning bodies leaping to another paradise
Moved her to tears.
We were let out of school early that day.
Nobody could properly explain why.

“Indivisible,”

The biggest change I can recall as a kindergartner
was arriving next morning and being asked to recite
a curious bit of poetry
outlining my fealty to my country.

Hand over heart, I dutifully mumbled
“With liberty and justice for all.”




“Goodbye my son,”
Said my optimistic mum
As I left the car for school.

Chest a-pounding,
Warning bells sounding,
I walked into the commons.

Standing alone,
Heart heavy as a stone,
I prayed that classes would begin.

As I waited silently,
A voice erupted violently,
“Do you believe in Jesus?!”

I ignored the gaffe
He released an obnoxious laugh
And I knew the first day at SPA would be a long one.

Ballad

An Epic Ballad Part One

Please, come ye all
I will be your guide
A tale I intend to tell
In you, I can confide

A yarn of great mystery
Of enigma, of thrill
The wildest of dreams
This story fulfills

In a land far away
A cradle of life among the stars
A feud between two nations
Erupted in a great war.

The cities burned wildly
Buildings fell to and fro
In the doorway of one house
A mother held her child close


A boy of one year
Hair fair, eyes blue
The mother wept and set him down
Then from the entry withdrew

There the boy lay
Oh so tender and weak
Yet the boy lay quietly
Not a tear on his cheek

People fell around him
Arrows in their back
Lungs seared by smoke
Flaming bodies black

Yet amid all the suffering
The babe remained immune
Blonde locks like the sun
Eyes... that frigid blue.

To be cont.




Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Journal Response


Some Glad Morning
Joyce Sutphens

One day, something very old
happened again. The green
came back to the branches,
settling like leafy birds
on the highest twigs;
the ground broke open
as dark as coffee beans.

The clouds took up their
positions in the deep stadium
of the sky, gloving the
bright orb of the sun
before they pitched it
over the horizon.

It was as good as ever:
the air was filled
with the scent of lilac
s and cherry blossoms
sounded their long
whistle down the track
It was some glad morning. 





Sutphens immediately drew me in with this poem by writing about nature which I've found is subject matter I can easily relate to and understand in poetry. Sutphens uses numerous interesting metaphors to describe the natural phenomena we encounter on a daily basis. When I read "the ground broke open / as dark as coffee beans," I involuntarily produce a very vivid image in my mind of what the soil looks like. I also really love how she explains the sun's journey across the sky as the clouds grabbing it and "[pitching] it over the horizon." I read most of the historical context for this poem given by Sutphens on her website; apparently, the life and work of Galileo were a huge inspiration for "Some Glad Morning." At first I was struggling to identify Galileo's presence in this poem in any way whatsoever. Then, I re-read that aforementioned bit of personification of the clouds, "gloving" and then "pitching" the sun like a baseball. This passage strongly implies that the sun is tossed around the Earth, moving independently while the Earth sits still. This directly reflects the general consensus on astronomy during Galileo’s time. Knowing this, I think there may be more meaning behind the opening lines of the poem: "One day, something very old / happened again." I feel like Sutphens must be referring to the fact that the Sun moving around the Earth would be "something very old" because people only believed this theory long, long ago. Lastly, I really love the lines "The clouds took up their / positions in the deep stadium / of the sky." Calling the sky a stadium implies that Earth is the main stage; we are the center of a show. The show of the universe. It sounds like a very egotistical mindset now, but in Galileo's time, that's what they truly believed.